This device (phone) is broken.
Write about a time you broke something!
OR
Imagine that you broke your device or phone and describe how it happened.
WALT use different sentence starters and lengths.
To do this, I will try to:
- Start sentences with different words
- Start sentences with capital letters
- Use other punctuation (check the ladder)
- Show my feelings
- Use my senses to describe
- Include strong verbs
BROKEN
I was working with my computer holding it by the screen and then it wacked into the wall but it didn't break. I kept working and then it slipped out of my hand and the screen cracked and I was going
oh no what am I going to do?
I took it home and mum said we will take it into the shop and get it fixed. I said thank you mum and when dad got home my mum and dad went to the computer shop and got the screen first.
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